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Deathred47 Username and Title: Deathred47 - The Melting Queen - I think, for some reason, of an ice sculpture when I see your title. And that is the death of it. Too Deep? (7/10) First Impression: You’ve been pending for a while, your patience is rewarded here… (5/5) Template: Basically, get rid of the tagboard as it makes your page too big, and isn’t needed really. You have Diaryland notes, and if you want a way to get outside comments, get a guestbook or put the board on another page and link it on the main page. Get rid of the clock thing as it only works when over the text not the image. (12/20) Content: You are taking a break from Diaryland apparently. Why not just look at your diary as a diary, not a hobby. Update when you want to for yourself, not readers. A Classic mistake that many diaries make. They turn from something enjoyable into a form of fanzine. All I can say about content, is that it is pretty run of the mill, nothing made my eyes pop out. (25/40) Links: Are fine. (5/5) Stalkability: Move Tagboard. (4/5) Lasting Impression: Well you‘ve been on the pending list for a while so you made one by default. (5/5) Extras: Nothing out of the ordinary, just the usual. (2/5) Will I come back? Mebi. (3/5) Total- 68/100 - 68% |

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