Imortlnoctrn
1:26 p.m. - 2005-07-04
Username and title: Imortlnoctrn - It means nothing to me, but I can see that it is an abbreviation of your title. I like the sound of your title, even though I don't understand it. (6/10)
First Impression: Why is it taking so long to load? And you have opted to the weblog format. (1/5)
Template: I can‘t get to grips with the weblog style. Weblogs aren‘t diaries and so should be on Pitas, not diaryland. Your template is dark and moody, and contrasts the white text. I can‘t say I hate it, but I don‘t love it at all. (8/20)
Content: Please....stop writing....like this. It is so annoying and hard to read. Your grammar and punctuation is like the cherry on a burnt cake. This isn‘t a diary, it is a checklist. I don‘t know you, and so know nothing about you. I feel like I'm reading the end of a book without reading the rest. You need to bear in mind that strangers read this, including reviewers. (5/40) Links: All work as far as I can see. (5/5) Extras: Put them under their own heading. (3/5) Stalkability: I can‘t see any links. (0/5) Lasting Impression: I wouldn’t read again, sorry. (0/5) Will I come back? I don’t think it’s likely. (0/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) I think you do, but you aren’t one with the writing yet. Total- 28/100- 28%
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