Kayrayne29
12:07 a.m. - 2005-09-07
Username and Title: Kayrayne29 - What you never wanted to know, but I’m telling you anyway... - The title definitely fits. It is funny and just works. I'm not such a fan of your name, but only because I don't really understand it. (7/10)
First Impression: I know you are only 21, but you are what I would call an 'oldie' when I review. This is only because majority of the people who request reviews seem to be in the 12 -15 region. Not that their is a problem with that of course, but sometimes the endless slang and boring talk about boys can get annoying! (5/5)
Template: When I first saw it I did home in on the fact that it is very dark, perhaps too dark. I like the white font as it contrasts the black. The font is a suitable size and doesn’t make your entries look daunting. I like the image although the font used on it could have been nicer. The only thing that ruins the serenity of the page is the massive birthday reminder and the ring link at the bottom. Not only are they shockingly bright and clash, but unnecessary. I find that they are more suitable on an extras page. I also think that the tagboard would look better on its own page. If you want something for the main page, stick with a simple comments system which can be obtained from Haloscan I think. (14/20)
Content: Before I start, please think about archiving! I didn‘t even know where to start when I looked at your archives! Diaryland explains it as you do it, and it makes your archive page look much smarter. Now, onto the actual reading.
I wonder what it is that makes me not want to stop reading, the graphic sexual descriptions, that I so wasn’t expecting (but love really) or the great writing skills. You definitely have a good talent for writing, and I’m not talking about fiction. You would probably make a good auto biographer or writer for a magazine. You are very funny, and interesting. And dirty. But who isn’t.
(40/40)
Links: Well organised, apart from the ones t the bottom. (2/5)
Stalkability: Just move your Tagboard.(4/5)
Lasting Impression: You are going onto my favourites list! (5/5)
Extras: Love the pictures. (4/5)
Will I come back? Self-explanatory in the review I think. (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor?(Ungraded) Ya.
Total- 86/100 - 86%
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