Alonenafraid
1:38 p.m. - 2005-02-26
Username and title: %%diary-alonenafraid%%- It only takes a sprinkle.... - I don‘t like the use of ‘n‘ instead of and. However, you have a nice title. (3/5)
First Impression: That film rules. (5/5)
Template: It really works. Everything is parallel and neat. It loos very smart indeed. The only peeve I have with it is that the title doesn‘t stick out at all. Nothing makes it clear. I always look at the title of the entry before reading it; it can say a lot about what you are reading. Try and bring it up a font size or 2. (19/20)
Content: I didn’t read all of your entries for the reasons that there were way too many, and I didn’t think I needed to. I have to say that I really enjoyed your entries. When I went through your archives I read the note to reviewers first and I had to say that it was interesting. I think that you should never have to justify your writing style. If you use slang and whatnot, you just have to bear that in mind when reading a review. Obviously reviewers will pick up on it, that is the point. It is supposed to highlight the problems in order for you to change them. It isn’t supposed to be about praise. Think that your entries are very good, and even though you aren’t a model diarist, you have a lot of potential to go far. Maybe because you are close to my age, and married that I enjoy reading your diary.
(38/40) Links: All work as far as I can see. I don‘t alphabetize my reviews either, but my font is a lot bigger than yours is so it could be an idea. (4/5) Extras: Some nice ones. And I see that you are an affiliate too! (5/5) Stalkability: The right ones. (5/5) Lasting Impression: I am glad you requested, because I found an interesting diary. (5/5) Will I come back? Yes. (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes. That is all I have to say there.
Total- 94/100- 94%
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