Andgirlsays-
9:39 a.m. - 2005-12-05
Username and Title: Andgirlsays- - let’s pretend to believe in always and forever - I like titles to be capitalised like a title is supposed to be. It looks better and is generally much neater. Your username is not explained anywhere, so I cant award marks for something I don’t understand. (2/10)
First Impression: Your layout is too small. (1/5)
Template: I don’t know what the point is in cramming everything into what must be 1/3 of the page. I do not like these layouts, and lets face it, usually the only person who does is the person who is writing. Sorry Bucko, the layout is the one part which you have to make according to who is reading your diary. And if you are getting proper reviews, then it needs to be bigger. Apart from the eye strain, there is nothing else here that creates problems.
Except you need to make the font size of your archives a lot smaller. (10/20)
Content: I’m going to elegantly sidestep they lovey-dovey-letmebesickinyourhair stuff that I find in every page which no reviewer wants to have to rake through.
Ah, the classic cutting entry. I was wondering when this was going to come up. Unfortunately, being a wise owl, I can neither empathize, sympathize or condemn on this issue. However it is rare now not to come across some of this on Diaryland. What id most amusing is if the writer thinks they are talking about an original subject.
Anyway, basically your entries are OK, but they lack much substance. They are very short and puffy with little or no information. Maybe work on length and substance. And for Gods sake sort out your grammar.(14/40)
Links: Are fine. (5/5)
Stalkability: Perhaps put them on their own page. (4/5)
Lasting Impression: You haven‘t really left one. I wasn‘t disgusted, but not impressed either.. (3/5)
Extras: Nothing out of the ordinary, just the usual. Your ’Girl’, isn’t really helpful. (2/5)
Will I come back? Sorry, I’d get eye-strain. (0/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor?(Ungraded) No.
Total- 41/100 - 41%
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