B3ckie
10:10 p.m. - 2005-01-03
Username and title: %%diary-b3ckie%%- polka dots- I don‘t really think either of them has the potential. I would change the title to something more relative. (1/10)
First Impression: This music- you either love it or hate it. And since I am trying not to disturb others, I do not like it. But marks for the fact I have never seen it before. (2/5)
Template: Nice and organised, although the text could be a more adventurous font, and maybe an easier to read colour, like white. Also, move the smilies link away from the end, as the design and host links should always go last.(16/20)
Content: I have split opinion on your diary. The first time I skimmed your entries and straight away thought ‘daylog, boring’, but when I re-read in more detail, I did find some interesting bits, just stifled by completely useless information, like the film you watched. I think maybe some careful thought about what you want to write and what you are actually writing. I find that some writers write anything just to elongate an entry. Maybe this is what you are doing subconsciously.
(30/40)
Links: All work as far as I can see, although I would place the music link much more strategically. (5/5)
Extras: Put them all on their own page to relieve your navigation. (4/5)
Stalkability: Your tagboard is very disguised in those colours! Still, fine by me. (5/5)
Lasting Impression: All in all an OK diary. (5/5)
Will I come back? No reason why not! Although I have to say, that before, the name would have put me off.
(5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Almost, you could have with some tuning.
Total- 73/100- 73%
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