Barelysmile
5:47 p.m. - 2004-11-17
Username and title: %%diary-barelysmile%%- ____&& nobody puts baby in the corner;;- I love your username. I am also a big Dirty dancing fan. But i don‘t see the point of all the __ and & and ; around it. (5/10) First Impression: My pet peeve = Capital letters. (0/10)
Template: %%diary-fsdesigns%% did well here. It has the look of a scrapbook or a collage. I always like the templates with the space on them to write about yourself. The only thing i don’t like are the grey text boxes. Grey never works in a template and should really only be used sparingly. Links should begin with a capital letter always! (25/30) Content: I always find that writers who are on their second or third diary to be twofold. They can either be completely engaging and know what they are doing from the first entry, or can appear bored, as they don’t have any attachment to their diary. I think you fall more into the first category than the first, although i know that I could never delete any of my entries, even if they really did suck.
Some of the things you start off the entry by saying were very nice, although sometimes I didn’t really understand. You convey your passion well and really do make sense to me when you do make sense, if you get that. the only thing that is really bugging me is the grammar and punctuation. Maybe it is the trainee teacher in me, but I can’t truly enjoy something unless it is correct like that.
(55/60) Links: All work. (10/10) Extras: Own page. Good. And all organised under headings. (5/5) Stalkability: Tagboard, notes, AIM/messenger and Email. A Guestbook wouldn‘t be all that bad. Make your AIM and E-mail's links.(9/10) Lasting Impression: A very positive one (10/10) Will I come back? Yes (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes, I would say that the factor is there. Total- 124/150- 83%
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