bluefaerie11
1:58 p.m. - 2004-10-30
Username and title: %%diary-bluefaerie11%%- spotty nonsense - Neither of them really jump out and bite me. The title is OK, but only because it matches your profile. (4/10)
First Impression: “no matter how much you try, you can't run away from your problems. Especially if one of your problems is a really big bear.” Love it.
(10/10)
Template: Very nice. An imageless layout, but very full of colour and originality. All of it is cool except none of the titles or links are capitalized. That makes it look sloppy. (25/30) Content: Pretty nice writing. I like it. Very funny and imaginative. I wish I could make a pinhole camera! But seriously, I read a lot of entries, and you can see how your writing has progressed and matured. The only critical point is that you need to remember that people like me who have never met you will be reading this, and will not have a clue who you are talking about. Bear it in mind.
(55/60) Links: All working. (10/10) Extras: Your rings link can go with your extras. Maybe look into external links. (4/5) Stalkability: E-mail, notes and Guestbook. If you wanted, you could get another, but it isn’t essential. (10/10) Lasting Impression: Looking good. (10/10) Will I come back? Yeah, sure. (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes Total- 133/150 - 89% You are eligible to join the 100+ Diaryring
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