Bratnatch
4:11 p.m. - 2005-02-10
Username and title: %%diary-bratnatch%%- Paperback Writer - Hmm, I am very torn here. The sound itself of Bratnatch isn’t very nice, and so I don’t like it. Your title is nice. (5/10) First Impression: Etc. (1/5)
Template: The big ‘etc’ didn’t exactly make good reading, or a good impression. I personally do not like grey wither. I also do not like the names of the links. It is confusing and ultimately very annoying that you have to go through them all to find which is the one you want. However, the entries are clear. I didn‘t hate it, but I didn‘t like it. (10/20) Content: Basically daylog. Some things are interesting, more so in your later entries. Sort of poetic in a natural sense. However I didn’t feel so involved. Normally I like it when I am reading a diary, and I can tell when I do because I tend to get very oral, maybe saying ‘yeah’ or ‘I thought that’. You, know, be involved. However I only got that once or twice.
You aren’t a bad writer, but you aren’t amazing.
(15/40) Links: All work as far as I can see. Just make them clearer if you can. (4/5) Extras: Not really that many. (1/5) Stalkability: Notes and Guestbook. No E-mail? (3/5) Lasting Impression: I am still undecided about this diary. I don‘t think you really have been writing enough yet to make an impression. (1/5) Will I come back? I doubt it. (1/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) I couldn‘t relate. Total- 41/100- 41%
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