confused269
7:01 p.m. - 2004-03-05
Username and title: confused269- come away with me. They don't really speak to me, although “come away with me” is a nice choice. I don’t know if the username would invite me, but hey, it works still. (4/10)
First Impression: Loving your template. Looking good to me so far in general. (10/10)
Template: I really like your template, mainly because the links are clear to see and the background colour is very nice. The navigation is very good and user-friendly and I'm liking the image, very original. It also makes sense with your title too. (30/30)
Content: I started at the beginning and worked my way through. The first 20 or so entries are very annoying. Mainly because between every sentence is a .......which makes it not only hard reading but looks messy. However, you can tell how your style of writing has greatly improved through comparing recent entries with older ones. I like your writing now. Its become more concise and expressive, you don't hold back, which I like, because in a lot of diaries I have read you can see that they are not writing what they really want to. To me that is one of the worst traits in a diary, but you don’t do that. It takes guts to be honest all the time and you should be happy about that. A lot of things you talk about confuse me, mainly because I don’t know you and therefore don’t know any problems or situations you are in. This is something you must be aware of if you want other people to read your diary that don’t know anything about you. You need to make sure you are logical. Your spelling and punctuation are fine, although you use a lot of slang. I do too, so no worries. (40/60)
Links: You have linked me, and all your links work fine. (10/10)
Stalkability: You have notes, email, guestbook and tagboard. A nice variety. You could use more but you don't really need to. (10/10)
Lasting Impression: As I have already said, you express yourself well and make sure that you write what you mean. Keep that up. I am still really liking your template. (10/10)
Extras: Poems, 150 things about you, 25 happy things, reviews, rings, cast, disclaimer, the girl, loves. You get the picture that there are a lot and a good variety. Probably no others you really need! (5/5)
Will I come back? I would say so. (5/5)
Total- 124/150
Very good indeed, keep it up!
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