Crazygyrlie
9:38 p.m. - 2004-10-14
Username and title: %%diary-crazygyrlie%%- Crazy Gyrlie‘s Diary /// v.10 The Care Bears in My Head- I don‘t really like your username. It makes me think immaturity straight away. Title is long but will do. (3/10)
First Impression: Never seen this before. (10/10)
Template: There are only a few things with this template that are wrong, so everything else you can assume is OK. Between random facts and pics, and also cast and rings you have a break missing. I do not like the word pic either. It looks lazy. The font needs to go up a size as I am straining my eyes to read. And after a hard day the last thing I need is a migraine. Capitalize your links. (20/30) Content: I am not going to read all those entries, but I like the archive method.
Your writing is pretty much standard. You tell it like it is but not to the extent where I want to praise you. Sometimes I am lost, and I am usually pretty aware in people’s diaries, as there is a point of ‘Blink and you’ll miss it’. Frankly I was a little disappointed. You have a lot of potential that I can see by some of your other older entries. You need to use it, let it rip.
(40/60) Links: All working. (10/10) Extras: The basics. Put them all on their own page. (4/5) Stalkability: Notes, AIM, Guestbook and E-mail. I like that they are under their own heading. (9/10) Lasting Impression: As a person, you are cool. As a writer, you aren’t there yet. You will be I am sure. (5/10) Will I come back? Maybe (4/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) See lasting impression. Total- 105/150 - 70% You are eligible to join the 100+ Diaryring
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