Dadagirl
9:40 a.m. - 2004-11-09
Username and title: %%diary-dadagirl%%- her hopes get so high they’re hard to handle and she stares as they fade out of view - Title is too long. I like dadagirl, very original, although you don’t actually explain the meaning to it. (4/10) First Impression: Self-designed. (10/10)
Template: I like the continuity of the image, but in 800x600 it doesn’t work. A good designer should be able to accommodate for this. Aside from that, the links are a bit random in the middle, and are a bit small, but I like that the entry is aligned to the right. (20/30) Content: Some stuff you talk about I find interesting, and I can get deeply into. Other entries I click off straightaway. You are a good writer, but I think you are still to find the right style of entry you are comfortable wit. You bounce between daylog and that nice kind of entry that everyone can read instantly. But this isn’t really a criticism, this is just something you will eventually discover.
(50/60) Links: From what I can see, all fine. (10/10) Extras: They need to go on their own page. (2/5) Stalkability: Again, own page. Otherwise they are in a really random order and is just too much hassle. (2/10) Lasting Impression: You are OK (8/10) Will I come back? Probably (4/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yeah, sure Total- 120/150 - 80%
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