darktwilite
8:04 p.m. - 2004-10-13
Username and title: %%diary-darktwilite%%- kristajeanonline- I like your username a lot. Very interesting. I don’t so much like your title. I would change that if I were you. (5/10)
First Impression: kristajeanonline again! (0/10)
Template: I like this template. It is very mysterious and dark, but also has that striking blue colour. It works. The picture is very nice, although I don’t understand it. Maybe that is why I like it. The light blue text has a nice effect, and I like the set out of the page. The only 3 criticisms are that your links are not capitalized and they are very small. You have no date on any of your entries. This is vital. (25/30) Content: You need to go less on the “So, I think I'll be talking to thou later-ish. I may be here soon, I may not. It depends.” There is no need to say that! It is just a waste of time, and looks messy. There is no E in Month. You did that a few times.
Overall, your writing is very day-log, and you talk about a lot of different people. It is impossible to follow sometimes. I like some of your more thoughtful entries like about ignorance. The only thing that put me off was that the day-log made the entry too long to read all of it. Diaries are much like meat. You need it in small chunks.
(40/60) Links: All working. (10/10) Extras: You have a nice variety, and I like the ideas you have. But I would much rather see the extra than just know you are going to do it. Just link the ones you have. (4/5) Stalkability: Notes, Guestbook and E-mail. (10/10) Lasting Impression: You are quite a cool person. (10/10) Will I come back? I don’t see why not (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yeah sure, I’ll give it to you! Total- 109/150 - 73% You are eligible to join the 100+ Diaryring
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