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7:32 p.m. - 2005-03-14
Username and title: %%diary-entity-%%- Poems Are Conceptual Shorthand- I do have issues with the hyphen as it seems to be irrelevant. I love the title; I would quote this anywhere. (8/10)
First Impression: The fact that it took me a long time to actually work out what this diary was all about didn‘t make a good one. (1/5)
Template: The fact that you use an image under the writing and then use white text makes it harder to read, regardless of which computer I use. I love the image and the clean look to the overall layout. The links to the various sites at the bottom could be more strategically placed, perhaps on a link page. Also, your newest entry link should have a capital letter. (18/20)
Content: It took me a long time to actually work out what you are all about. Your about page is much too vague and left me confused. A lot of entries also did this to me, but I can only construe this as a rush of thoughts/emotions being written down, which I can totally feel. Sometimes entries can be more interesting if you actually sit and work out the meaning. I see what you mean about it being treated as a novel. I think novel maybe have been an exaggeration but I get that vibe. A few of your older entries very much bring your points down compared to your earlier entries. However, we can’t all be amazing all the time.
Overall there was a lot I didn’t understand, however I could see the thoughts there, even if I had trouble interpreting them.
(38/40) Links: All work as far as I can see. The titles and words in the link area which aren‘t links make it difficult to differentiate. (4/5) Extras: None? (0/5) Stalkability: The right ones. (5/5) Lasting Impression: I would definitely come back and get stuck into some more entries. (5/5) Will I come back? Yes. (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes, although I think you are misunderstood.
Total- 84/100- 84%
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