eowyn86
4:53 p.m. - 2004-08-11
Username and title: eowyn86- It‘s a beautiful day-don‘t let it get away-I didn’t reckon your username much when I first started, but once finding the explanation I liked it a lot. See how it can make all the difference! I like the title, as it’s pretty. It is also a U2 song if I am correct. (9/10)
First Impression: The picture in your template, although nice, takes ages to load. (20/30)
Template: I am always a big fan of own-made templates. They are so much more personal. I like the extras being on their own at the side and I like the whole set up in general. Once the picture has loaded it all looks lovely. There isn’t really anything more I can say except that the writing is a similar colour to the template and so a little hard to see. (28/30)
Content: I will pick a few entries at random. On the whole I like your entries and writing style as it is very thoughtful. Some for your entries, like the latest one that I am reading is very insightful and inquisitive. Your early entries are typical daylog, which everyone’s first entries are. We all have to somewhat get used to the format. I am glad to see that this has passed, as some diaries never get out of that habit. Your spelling, grammar and punctuation appear fine, which is always a plus. I like the little quote boxes at the end of your entries; they are very thought provoking. You should link it in with the next entry or something, like a kind of “next time” box or something. It has the possibility to be anything! Everything else is 2 thumbs up. Maybe try to be a little more concise is all the advice I can give. (58/60)
Stalkability: Notes, e-mail and Guestbook. I usually prefer another method that is a little quicker, like a tagboard. (8/10)
Lasting Impression: I like your writing a lot, and you have left a positive impression on me. (10/10)
Extras: A nice variety of internal links. Maybe find some external or interactive ones. (3/5)
Will I come back? Yah. (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded): Looks good to me!
Total- 141/150
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