Eye-heart-me
10:22 a.m. - 2004-10-08
Username and title: %%diary-eye-heart-me%%- meow. - Interesting description of your username. I am not such a fan of it though. Your title could be a bit more adventurous. (5/10)
First Impression: Looks OK to me (10/10)
Template: I have never seen this one before. It all works quite well. The links are in a clear place, and the entry box is defined from everything else. The colours are nice too. It is just the image I can’t work out. It looks OK, but to be honest, it isn’t really a ’you’ template. (20/30) Content: Firstly, like the way you have archived.
Your writing is interesting, but from the main part that I chose to read, it is focussed around your break up. It just sounds like a regular teenage life to me. All of your goings on is pretty standard, but I do still like your wring. Maybe concentrate on moving away from the daylog. Then you will get more out of your diary. I like the way your cast pops up on a pop-up. I have never seen that before.
So overall, your writing is OK, but there isn’t anything that particularly knocks my socks off.
(20/60) Links: All work and I like the review links as a scroll bar. (10/10) Extras: I like the mini-bio, but you don‘t need it listed in the main navigation and the extras. Same with the pictures. (4/5) Stalkability: Notes, Guestbook and E-mail. Maybe put them all on a contact page to condense your navigation. (10/10) Lasting Impression: I hope everything works out with you (10/10)
Will I come back? Maybe (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) The fact that you are about my age bodes well for you. Total- 94/150
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