Faerie-jewel
10:21 a.m. - 2005-02-04
Username and title: %%diary-faerie-jewel%%- ____youre a waste of my tears // (entry name) - You have missed the apostrophe is you’re. I don’t see the point in the ___ either. I don’t really like that ‘faerie’ part of your username. Sparks immaturity straight away. (1/10) First Impression: Out of proportion, and I can see why. (0/5)
Template: Your tagboard shouldn’t be there. It distorts your template completely. Put it on it’s own page. You use no capital letters, and there is a lot of imageless space in contrast to the top half of your template. The names of your links aren’t the best either. Get a new template.
The reason why you get no marks also- your archive template is completely different to your entry template! That is the worst mistake in the world. (0/20) Content: “ish jennikins 14th bdai! =) yay! *clap clap* hopez yah hav a gr8 bdai n yeh...hehez...juss memba dat we all luv yah! dun stress 2 much coz yoOh mite get rinklez on ure face aiightz? happy bdai hunnie!” What the hell is this? I know it is an early entry, but please. “im afraid to die alone and unloved”, how old are you again? Too young to be thinking this I tell you. The old man you were talking about could be happily married for all you know. Never assume anything. I’m skipping ahead to try and find something I like that is recent, but alas, it is all the same. Your entries are totally pointless and uninteresting. The only entry that made me not want to smash the screen was your entry on destiny. Try and write more like that. You obviously have the capacity, but you aren’t using it. (5/40) Links: All work as far as I can see. Just change the names. (4/5) Extras: Like, 2? And the names are very off-putting. (2/5) Stalkability: Link your notes! That is like the main contact through diaryland! (1/5) Lasting Impression: If your entries picked up, you could have to potential to be an OK diary. (5/5) Will I come back? Right. (1/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) N/A Total- 19/100- 19%
Unfortunately, this puts you in the hall of shame.
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