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Find-katie Username and title: %%diary-find-katie%%- My Escape- I love find-katie, is very poetic. I also like that your title is short and basically to the point. You do however need to explain these somewhere. (10/10) First Impression: My eyes are hurting from all the strain. (0/5) Content: You have the poetic thing going on. Some stuff you write about, I don’t really understand, but nevertheless it sounds nice. I like "Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem." It really sums everything up, but you ruined the entry asking for Guestbook entries! Links: All work as far as I can see, but changing the names of the main links wouldn’t go amiss. (4/5) Extras: Your downfall. You need to work on these, and maybe separate them from the “The Writer” page. (2/5) Stalkability: Notes, E-mail and Guestbook. Fine (5/5) Lasting Impression: I would be reluctant to persevere with your entries due to the health warning it should carry for my eyes. Your template is giving me damage. (0/5) Will I come back? See above (0/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Without the template? Yes Total- 60/100- 60% |

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