Find-katie
9:53 a.m. - 2004-12-21
Username and title: %%diary-find-katie%%- My Escape- I love find-katie, is very poetic. I also like that your title is short and basically to the point. You do however need to explain these somewhere. (10/10)
First Impression: My eyes are hurting from all the strain. (0/5)
Template: WAY too small. Sorry, but I’m going to rip into it here. It is way too small, meaning the writing, the links, the border, everything. The image is completely not to scale and diverts all the attention away from the writing. The size of the text makes your archive page impossible to read. I don‘t like the names of the links, they should be called what they are. You need a whole new template. (0/20)
Content: You have the poetic thing going on. Some stuff you write about, I don’t really understand, but nevertheless it sounds nice. I like "Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem." It really sums everything up, but you ruined the entry asking for Guestbook entries!
Your entries are nice, some are really nice, and some are excellent. I didn’t find any that I sincerely didn’t like.
(39/40)
Links: All work as far as I can see, but changing the names of the main links wouldn’t go amiss. (4/5)
Extras: Your downfall. You need to work on these, and maybe separate them from the “The Writer” page. (2/5)
Stalkability: Notes, E-mail and Guestbook. Fine (5/5)
Lasting Impression: I would be reluctant to persevere with your entries due to the health warning it should carry for my eyes. Your template is giving me damage. (0/5)
Will I come back? See above (0/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Without the template? Yes
Total- 60/100- 60%
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