Flower-21
12:22 p.m. - 2005-01-15
Username and title: %%diary-flower21%%- HERMIONE - I couldn’t find a meaning anywhere, unless I can’t find it. I'm guessing 21 is for your age. Your title obviously ties in with your template (9/10)
First Impression: I liked that you made everything yourself with no help. (5/5)
Template: I am not so much of a Harry Potter fan, so this template will only really appeal to that section of diaryland. However, the fact that you designed it yourself gives you brownie points. The first thing that strikes me as confusing is your links at the side. You have way too many, and need to put all your extras under one link on their own page. Also, the host link traditionally goes last at the end of your links, basically because it is the least clicked on, but most vital. Another thing is that it doesn‘t fit in my 800x600 resolution. You need to make universal templates really. (15/20)
Content: You have a mix of entries. The first few I read were short and sweet, and then I came across a few long entries. Make sure you remember to paragraph, otherwise entries look very mundane, even if they are interesting! Your writing is nice; you talk about your own family a lot, and seem to have a very good outlook on life. Enjoyable reading that I would recommend to any Mother or someone who just enjoys a nice diary now and then.
(40/40)
Links: All work as far as I can see. Just organise the links on the layout. (4/5)
Extras: Nice ones, cool. (5/5)
Stalkability: Notes, Guestbook, and E-mail. Maybe put them on their own page. (4/5)
Lasting Impression: I liked it. (5/5)
Will I come back? Yeah. (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes.
Total- 92/100- 92%
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