For-you-only
2:10 p.m. - 2005-05-10
Username and title: %%diary-for-you-only%%- Why Am I Crying? - I don‘t know, why? The username is OK, but is a bit of an oxymoron. For you only would indicate that this was for one person only, where this cannot be true as you are not locked. (7/10)
First Impression: When you first requested, I couldn’t review you because your page was so disorganised. At least now it is a bit more refined. (3/5)
Template: When you first requested, I couldn’t review you because your page was such a mess of clutter and links. You have gotten rid f those massively unnecessary picture links, but still have the shoutbox right there in prime space. This should really be on its own page. At least now everything fits my page. You have indicated what resolution goes best, but a good designer will make a universal template that looks good in all resolutions. There aren’t many people I know who have the requirements you have. Points for the fact that it is designed by you.
(15/20)
Content: You are definitely very self-centred. All your entries are about you and people’s feelings to you and how you feel about you and how everything is about you. Its true that you must look after number 1, but I think you take it a little to the max. I also think that you are very needy and constantly look for reassurance that your boyfriend does love you, or you are pretty etc. This is evident in some o the things you say which even though you won’t admit it, and maybe don't even realise, but you do for the attention and the shock factor. That can be conveyed in many ways, which is why your shoutbox is littered with comments. Just to let you know, as much as I appreciate you indicating entries to be read by reviewers, I very much dislike it. I like to do my own reviews, on what I choose to read. Scrap that, as I know many reviewers who get truly offended by it.
(18/40)
Links: All work as far as I can see, and I like that they are all under the site map. (5/5)
Extras: Lots, and due to the supergold account, the photographs do work for it. (5/5)
Stalkability: Notes, Guestbook, E-mail, Shoutbox, Comments. I do not like the imprinted questions in the Guestbook entry. You are making something personal very impersonal. (4/5)
Lasting Impression: I think you have a lot of growing up to do, despite that you already think you are human. Did you know that the brain doesn‘t stop growing till the mid 20‘s? (3/5)
Will I come back? I think it is likely. (4/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) This isn’t really applicable.
Total- 64/100- 64%
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