Frogmom
5:29 p.m. - 2005-07-06
Username and title: Frogmom - frogmom - I would like it more if you wrote frogmom with a capital letter. In fact, the title could be much more original than what it is. Frogmom makes me think of a frogman; as in a scuba diver. (6/10)
First Impression: I can‘t get the ‘who links to me‘ link to work. (0/5)
Template: I like the child-like essence of it. It is bright, but not overpowering. The only things that could do with some improvement are the links. Not only could you minimise them by putting most of them under ’extras’; either another page or a heading, but also when I click or highlight the longer ones, they move. I also think that the birthday things could be more suited off the main layout and on an extras page. Apart from these 2 points, I like this layout a lot. (15/20)
Content: I have come to the conclusion that if I knew you and your family then I would find your diary amazing. Because I don’t know you I do not find you amazing, but I do enjoy reading. I think that if you are going to expose your diary to people that don’t know you from sally then you would need to bear this in mind when you write. Otherwise people will come in and leave straight away in a confusion of names and locations. I do think that you convey who you are through your writings in a non-superficial way. You come across as a caring, competent woman and would probably make a good friend! (35/40) Links: All work as far as I can see. (5/5) Extras: Lots, but please think about relocating them. (5/5) Stalkability: Always a fan of comments. (5/5) Lasting Impression: I would definitely read again. (5/5) Will I come back? Yes. (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes, the Mother figure. Total- 81/100- 81%
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