Gachoo
12:02 p.m. - 2004-05-30
Username and title: Gachoo- Your presence still lingers here, And it won’t leave me alone... - Your username is interesting, but I can’t find any meaning for it. It sounds like a sneeze. As for your title, it matches your template and I love that song. (7/10)
First Impression: Your own made template? I’ve never reviewed anyone who has made his or her own template. (10/10)
Template: The fact that you made it yourself gets you very high marks. I like the song, the image and the colours. Links are organised very nicely, the only little criticism I could possibly find is that the text of your entries is a little small. But still, great template. (29/30)
Content: I like you. Your writing is intelligent and interesting, as it is descriptive. You involve the reader and make them want to read more, which is a key skill. The fact that you have a detailed cast helps too, as I hate it when I read a diary and have no idea who the people are. You’re very perceptive of the world around you, such as your Mum having a CAT scan. I know how it feels to be worried about a parent; my Dad has cancer at the moment. I like that you sometimes white specifically to one person, as it makes me feel like I'm being nosey, (Which I love doing!)
I suggest that you archive, as that page is beginning to fill up and is very hard to read. Maybe a bigger font size for those pages? They need to be clearer. Apart from that, you’re fine. (55/60)
Links: You have linked me, and as far as I can see all your links work. They are perfectly organised too. (10/10)
Stalkability: Email, notes, guestbook. Looks good to me. (10/10)
Lasting Impression: You are a good writer, and even though the amount of time you have been writing is relative, it’s still a good diary, a sort of work-in-progress. I say that because before you know it you will have hundreds of entries, and hey, a diary is never really finished is it? (10/10)
Extras: A few bits and bobs that you have written yourself. (5/5)
Will I come back? Yes. (5/5)
Total- 141/150
Thanks for waiting so long too!
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