Giantkiller
6:13 p.m. - 2004-09-27
Username and title: %%diary-giantkiller%%- Beautiful - I like the simplicity of your title, but as far as I can see it is just the built in template title. I like the explanation of the username, but without knowing this, I would be hesitant to click. (5/10)
First Impression: Font is a bit unadventurous (1/10)
Template: I have seen someone else with this template before, and it has it‘s strengths and weaknesses. The colours are all in general pretty nice; they are easy on the eyes and mix well. I like the size of the text box, and the writing is at a readable size. However, I do not like the font, as there are so many others to choose from. I also think that the image does not fit at all, especially with the songwords chosen. To be honest, having read your entries, I do not think that this layout suits your style at all. Look into another one, I plug some excellent sites which might be able to accommodate you. (15/30)
Content: From skimming your latest entry, I wouldn’t have guessed that you are a devout Christian, until I see that you mentioned your bible. God obviously plays a huge part in your life. As I am no longer Catholic, I really do not understand much of the things you are writing. It isn’t that you are not clear enough, because you are, but I just do not understand how someone can be so devoted to something that you cannot prove the existence of. I would like to know about this, as I have had many an argument with Christian girls, mainly because I am in a Catholic Girls Convent school. I agree on some things you say, like about a diary being a sanctuary. I think everyone feels that way about their serious diary and that sometimes you need a place to spill.
I am interested in your thoughts, not just as you singular, but you as a Christian. Some things you say make a lot of sense, others I couldn‘t disagree more on, a lot to do with God. But I like that I don’t agree with everything, otherwise where‘s the fun in that?
The only pointers I can give are to maybe think about people like me whom aren’t Christian who maybe reading this. Try to get them into your thoughts, try to get them to understand the passion you have about God, because, lets be honest here, it isn‘t the easiest thing to get your head round. Other than that, everything is just fine.
May I recommend archiving; it makes the whole older page look much more readable. (50/60)
Links: Problems on you archive page. You need to make your extras and reviews links a lot more prominent instead of losing them under your exits. You also have some broken links where your Imood usually goes. (5/10)
Stalkability: Notes, Guestbook, and E-mail. Think about maybe an AIM or Tagboard. You can never have too many contact methods. (9/10)
Lasting Impression: I hope you like this review, as I am not the one to be ruse about another’s beliefs. You have made a good impression, and I can see that you are pretty much a nice caring person with a lot of love to give. (10/10)
Extras: Cast, surveys, pictures, quizzes, explanations etc. I especially liked Googlism. (5/5)
Will I come back? I don’t see why not (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Perhaps, but you just need to heed the comments, and think about choosing a more expressive layout that will reflect you diary.
Total- 105/150
You are able to join the dudettestar 100+ ring.
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