Girly-Pirate
7:01 p.m. - 2005-03-12
Username and title: %%diary-girly-pirate%%- // the good life- You really should have thought longer before choosing this. It would turn me off straight away. Add an entry explaining why you chose this and then link it. The Title matches the template, so well done there. (5/10)
First Impression: You made a terrible one from just the requesting stage. (0/5)
Template: I like the black and white photo style colour scheme used throughout. It gives it a very antiquated look, as does the old fashioned car pictured. I do however fail to see how this template reflects you. I would have thought an older man would use this template, or at least an adult. However, it is a nice template. The weaknesses are that the links are tiny and not capitalised, which makes it look sloppy. They aren‘t very dark either, so this combined with the size makes them hard to read. The counter could be in a better place and the link at the bottom doesn‘t work. You also have big problems on your archive page. (10/20)
Content: For the first few entries your style is totally different in each one. The second entry you write is very stylised and short sentence structure. Then the next entry is very ‘teenage’. “Yesterday, I meet this really cool guy in a chat room, but when I saw him on the webcam, he was really ugly. Like.. yuck”. Immature language and style. Obviously I am taking into account your age, but it is a very different style than before. In fact, your stark immaturity does jump at me in many entries. I feel like you are in a rush to grow up instead of just enjoying youth. When you are still young and hit 18, you will be longing for it back. (20/40)
Links: A broken one at the bottom of the page. (0/5)
Extras: These need some serious attention. (2/5)
Stalkability: You only link your e-mail. You need to link your notes, and get a Guestbook. They are the fundamental contact methods. (2/5)
Lasting Impression: You have a lot of growing up to do, but don’t be in a rush to do so. (2/5)
Will I come back? No. (0/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) n/a
Total- 41/100- 41%
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