Gupy
8:59 p.m. - 2005-09-04
Username and Title: Gupy - I AM MAKING IT HAPPEN - You need to get rid of the capital letters. It looks bad, to say the least. Gupy just makes me think of cartoon fish. I happen to like cartoon fish though so you are good. (5/10)
First Impression: The second I scrolled down I blanched. You'll see why...(0/5)
Template: OK, I like the fact that you have an image less template and stick to a basic colour scheme. However everything under the entry has to go. it looks terrible! You must agree on some level, no? Just copy and paste all those links onto their own extras page and you'll be fine. it makes changing templates a lot easier too. Please, you lost most of your marks here. (5/20)
Content: Firstly, please archive your older entries. it isn't that hard, and it looks much neater. Otherwise you end up with a long list of entries, and the reviewer won't want to even attempt to look through them.
Your writing is OK, but because I don't know you from the person on the bus I know nothing about what you are talking about. It wouldn't hurt to put a bit of detail in here or there, explain things more, maybe talk about other things besides your day. Apart from that, I liked what I read. You seem to be pretty average, much like me. I didn't read too many entries because of your daunting archives. (34/40)
Links: Please organize them. (1/5)
Stalkability: Please, put them on their own page. (2/5)
Lasting Impression: If you sorted out your links you'd have a nice little diary. (4/5)
Extras: Just the crap at the bottom? (1/5)
Will I come back? Self-explanatory in the review I think. (2/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor?(Ungraded) Too messy at the moment.
Total- 54/100 - 54%
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