Imonlyadream
12:41 p.m. - 2004-10-03
Username and title: %%diary-imonlyadream%%- don‘t wake me up- I like your username a lot, I would definitely click it. The title could be better, but at least it matches your template. (9/10)
First Impression: Hmm, not what I was expecting at all (0/10)
Template: This is a very nice template. The Image is cute and I like the quote with it. It is overall quite a mellow template with the white. I like that the links are in a separate box, not dotted about everywhere. The previously gets a bit lost though at the bottom. Maybe move it with the other links? (25/30) Content: I was not expecting to be reviewing an anorexic diary. This is not an attack on you but I hate when people who have an eating disorder talk about it like it is totally normal. The absurd diet of only eating on certain days is just pointless, and I find no interest at all. I liked ’Imprints of my face’, but maybe because it is one of the few entries which isn’t fixated on food. It is practically every entry. You are probably making yourself more ill writing about food all the time. Some of your recent entries are less fixated on food, so there is some improvement, but they are now just about how you feel ‘fat‘. So maybe not so different.
At least your spelling is OK (20/60) Links: All work (10/10) Extras: A few. Maybe look into some external links. I like the more page. (4/5) Stalkability: Guestbook, Notes, E-Mail, AIM. (10/10) Lasting Impression: As a person, when you aren’t talking about food, you are interesting. Otherwise I am just bored and frustrated at you. (2/10)
Will I come back? I doubt it. (0/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Not as such Total- 80/150
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