Jaykay617
9:17 a.m. - 2005-03-27
Username and title: %%diary-jaykay617%%- I Found The Heart I‘ve Been Looking For - I cannot find any kind of explanation for the username. I don‘t really like it because it means nothing to me. If it has relevance, explain it somewhere. Title matches to layout. (4/10)
First Impression: The ‘Bio’ link is very misleading and should be changed to ’Profile’. (1/5)
Template: There seems to be a lot going on at once, what with the links and the images and the extra bits like ‘The Girl‘ and counters. Personally I find templates with little bio bits in them a little bit heavy, and I don‘t think that you can fit all you need to fit in that small space. I don‘t like the counter either, it doesn‘t match and could be swapped for a much less bulky version from many websites going at the moment. The ‘hugs‘ thing that was a Diaryland craze about a year ago now just looks cheesy. Especially on the main page. Move this to your extra’s page. I also find your ‘unkymoods’ much too bulky and unnecessary. This would be much more at home on an extra page.
Now, I like the colours you use for font and links, they match the image, and the white background very much sets the page. I like the positioning of links and entry, and I like that you have divided your links up into the appropriate sections.
(10/20)
Content: Honestly, I was bored. Basically all your entries are long, drawn out daylog which I found no interest in. You sound like you are talking on the phone to someone who knows you well. I do not know you well and so have trouble understanding, even when looking at you cast. Occasionally there was an entry, which I enjoyed, but the vast amount of daylog made a much too lasting impression on me.
You can write, but I just don’t think you are writing about the right things. Sure, you have some good entries, but they are in the minority. And I am not saying that the others are bad, I am just saying that to me, an outsider, they meant nothing.
(10/40)
Links: All work as far as I can see. Change the ‘bio‘ link. (4/5)
Extras: Lots (5/5)
Stalkability: Again, lots. (5/5)
Lasting Impression: I was disappointed, as I have seen you before on pending lists of different sites and thought that maybe you would be better than you are. (1/5)
Will I come back? No. (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) N/A
Total- 50/100- 50%
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