Jellybeanz-
6:25 p.m. - 2005-01-04
Username and title: %%diary-jellybeanz-%%- Miserable with Mia- Both could be better. I think that the username is completely irrelevant to the content of your diary, and the title could be better by a long shot. Try a quote. (1/10)
First Impression: The massive %%diary-cuttersclub%% link could be placed anywhere but there and look better. (0/5)
Template: Something about it doesn‘t look right. I think it is the links that the title is centre aligned, but the links are aligned to the left. The white background, which can work for many diaries just doesn’t look right here. If I were you, I’d look for a whole new template. (6/20)
Content: I am afraid I am not going to restrict myself here. You write like a child, and I don’t mean that you are writing your age because I am talking maturity. Using phrases like LMAO do not make god writing. In fact, it is very annoying. You are clearly have some kind of problem, which I neither feel sorry for nor condone. “I've written more death poems, I mite put them on here, but yeah there's probably no point, im up to 41 handwritten pages..almost 200 poems about suicide! And my friends are only just beginning to suspect that i mite b having dark thoughts!!!!”. You are a typical attention seeker cutter and have some kind of ‘eating disorder’. It is one thing having a problem as many do, but it is quite another writing about it freely, knowing people will read it. But unfortunately I have no sympathy, because I have been a reviewer and a diarist for too long.
Grammar and spelling need a lot of work. (2/40)
Links: All work as far as I can see (5/5)
Extras: All under their own heading. (5/5)
Stalkability: Notes, E-mail and Guestbook. And under there own heading. (5/5)
Lasting Impression: I think I have said all I have to say. Open your eyes and look around you. There is more to life than appearance and image. I mean, think of the amount of people who have just died in Thailand and the Maldives area for nothing. Life is too sacred, and we only get one read-through. (0/5)
Will I come back? No. (0/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) No. It is neither ‘cool’ nor interesting to self-harm or restrict.
Total- 24/100- 24%
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