Jens-World
7:41 p.m. - 2004-10-04
Username and title: %%jens-world%%- my perspective- Original. From your username explanation, it just looks like you have had a review, they have asked you what your name means and you have just guessed it. Full marks for trying though. Your title would look better capitalized. (8/10)
First Impression: That damm cat... (0/10)
Template: I like imageless templates, they are much more peaceful. Pink, lilac and white look nice together. I also like the squared theme. I don’t like that random quiz thing though, get rid of it or put it in an extras page only. The only other thing that gets my goat is that none of your links are capitalized. Sort that out. (25/30) Content: I’m flicking..... All of your entries pretty much follow suite. They are all about the same thing, and that is either boys of yourself. You just come across as very immature and petty. You are only 12? No wonder you sound so immature, you are!
This is exactly what I mean. Who does that in a diary? I am sorry, but I find absolutely not interest in reading all this stuff, it is neither informative, nor interesting. I just feel like I’m reading my little brothers thoughts. (0/60) Links: All work as far as I can tell (10/10) Extras: The only part of your diary that didn't show your age. (5/5) Stalkability: Notes, E-Mail. Get a Guestbook. (5/10) Lasting Impression: You need to write about something else other than boys and how everyone “hates“ you. (1/10)
Will I come back? No. (0/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) No Total- 54/150
P.S I wouldn’t advise writing your full name all the time. If you typed into a search engine, anyone could find it.
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