Lostcookie
1:49 p.m. - 2005-03-07
Username and title: %%diary-lostcookie%%- That‘s the way the cookie crumbles...- I like that they both work with each other. In fact, I really like them both. They are cute. But why is the cookie lost? (10/10)
First Impression: Capital letters in your layout, and the lacking of them. (0/5)
Template: Capital letters are my pet peeve. A lot of layouts do not come with capitalized links, so try to make a point of changing them. It just looks sloppy otherwise.
I like the simplicity of the design. There aren’t a rush of bright colours, it is very solemn and an autumn palette. It looks smart as it doesn’t crowd the page, and there aren’t links left right and centre. Just left. (15/20)
Content: A 16-year-old British brunette currently studying AS Levels at a sixth form in London hey? Guess what? I am an 18 year old British Brunette currently studying A2 Levels at a sixth form in London. Strange hey? British girls on Diaryland are a dying race. I think that the reason that I like your diary is because it isn’t full of Americanised jokes that I don’t tend to get. It is basically the sort of stuff I can imagine would be like many of my friend’s diaries. Interesting and funny. Also, don’t worry about people finding your diary online that you know. I have a stats tracker, and the people in my life finding my diary either find it from searching their own full names, or searching random things like ‘Rubber band ball’. If you are worried, either censor names or lock yourself. Otherwise there is always a possibility.
(40/40) Links: All fine. (5/5) Extras: Your downfall. Work on these. (1/5) Stalkability: The right ones. Maybe put them all on one page and link that. (4/5) Lasting Impression: I would say that I enjoyed this one. (5/5) Will I come back? Yes. (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes. All the English are.
Total- 85/100- 85%
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