Lostgem
7:46 p.m. - 2004-10-06
Username and title: %%diary-lostgem%%- you know you want to- I really do like lostgem! There is something about it that makes me want to find it. You username is cool too, but would look better if you capitalized. (9/10)
First Impression: I have this template on one of my diaries (10/10)
Template: I think it‘s the image I like about this. Not what you would expect, you would expect it to be the other way round. Somewhat controversial. And even though I hate the colour, it actually looks somewhat nicer here. Your comments are a bit hidden though. Maybe move it up? (25/30) Content: You sure can write can‘t you? I tell you, there isn’t very often that I am this engaged so early in a review. I am pleasantly surprised. I especially like the last few entries you have written. They literally radiate your maturity! There is really not much else for me to say except keep up the good work!
You have the occasional typo, and your grammar is not always perfecto, but you can work on that. (58/60) Links: All work (10/10) Extras: Some. To relieve your main page, make an extras page to put all of them on. (4/5) Stalkability: Notes, E-Mail. Try for a Guestbook. (8/10) Lasting Impression: I would recommend you. I am sure that others will feel the same. (10/10)
Will I come back? Yes (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes. Total- 139/150 Please join the dudettestar Diaryring.
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