lumin-ant
10:49 a.m. - 2004-03-25
Username and title: Lumin-ant- riding the quirky red bus to happiness. I love the title but I'm not too keen on the username. Mainly because I don't understand the meaning and it wouldn‘t attract me to your diary. (3/10)
First Impression: You may be one of the youngest people I've reviewed so far. Prove that that all young writers don’t just spout nonsense. I have a feeling you may do. (8/10)
Template: Cute template, which ties in with your title. Easy navigate in, the font and text colour of your entries fine. What can I say? (30/30)
Content: I love your writing. It really is like reading a younger version of myself. Don't give up this diary, mainly because I enjoy it but because I think it’s a waste to do so. You sometimes swear depending on your mood but who doesn‘t. Your mood is reflected well in your writing, which, as I have said to others, is a hard task. Keep up the good work. No criticisms. (60/60)
Links: You have linked me, links more work. Nothing else can be said! (10/10)
Stalkability: Plenty of contacts. Good enough. I also like that you like to your other and older diaries. (10/10)
Lasting Impression: You’re writing is original and mature for your age. You should be happy with your life and content, as some people aren’t as lucky as to even be able to write, let alone with your style. (10/10)
Extras: Too many for my hands to type, but a nice variety, and some original ones too! I like bandgeek? (5/5)
Will I come back? Yes. (5/5)
Total- 141/150
Completed it without your locked entry. I felt I didn't need it.
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