Macrocarpa
7:23 p.m. - 2004-11-08
Username and title: %%diary-macrocarpa%%- Where, exactly, do we go from here? - I would like to see some kind of explanation for the username. I will give you credit for it though. Ditto to the title. (8/10) First Impression: They recite that little quote in “Harriet the Spy”, one of my favourite films. (10/10)
Template: Very sore on the eyes. The red is very striking. But despite this, its OK. The only thing I would change is instead of calling the link to your reviews “Extras“, call it “Reviews“. Extras is very misleading. (28/30) Content: Your writing is OK, but there is something about it that is somewhat boring. I hate to put it like that, but you didn’t have that edge that gets me interested. You talk about people that I have never heard of, and refer to situations I have no idea about. You either need to stop this, or insert a very detailed cast page.
(20/60) Links: From what I can see, all fine. (10/10) Extras: Basically none. Sort this out. (0/5) Stalkability: You need a Guestbook, otherwise non-diarylanders will not be able to comment other that your email. That is not good enough at all! (2/10) Lasting Impression: An OK diary but needs some tuning (5/10) Will I come back? Maybe with a cast page (2/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) The template quote gave you some Total- 85/150 - 57%
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