margot08
8:45 p.m. - 2004-10-07
Username and title: %%diary-margot08%%- inside my mind- You need to explain both somewhere. I like them though. Capitalize your title. (7/10)
First Impression: I feel as if I am the only one who has seen the Royal Tannenbaums sometimes. (10/10)
Template: It‘s a nice template I gather, but to be honest, I don‘t really think this is you. I liked the one you had before, the Tannenbaum one. I think that would be so much better. Also, I know I said to link me, but it just looks silly there. Move it to an extras page. (20/30) Content: To be blunt, your writing is very reflective and interesting, but your grammar is terrible. Not a capital letter in sight. This makes very monotonous reading. Sort this out in future, otherwise you will lose readers fast. Capitals are my pet peeve.
Your writing is good; I enjoy what I read, but try to veer away from daylog and more to the topical side of writing. Pick something you enjoy talking about, like war, love or a current affair. Then you will be able to express yourself more. Try it. (30/60) Links: Profile and notes links don’t work. You need to change the USERNAME in the link to lower case. Your next and previous links have the same problem. (0/10) Extras: None. Work on them. (0/5) Stalkability: Notes only and the link doesn’t work. You need to get a Guestbook if non-diarylanders want to note you, and link to your email. (1/10) Lasting Impression: Sort everything out and you are golden. (5/10)
Will I come back? I will say so (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) You will soon. Total- 78/150
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