Marieedusept
3:54 p.m. - 2004-12-11
Username and title: %%diary-marieedusept%%- Mariee du Septembre: Bride of September- I love them! So original! Full marks. (10/10)
First Impression: I am almost always a fan of an adult‘s diary. (5/5)
Template: I really like this. It is very well presented, and I think it suits you as a person and a writer very well. It keeps to the same colour scheme, and is very elegant. One thing, the writing could be another colour; it is just hard to read red on red. Do you not agree? The links at the side specifically highlight this problem. (18/20)
Content: Well, aren’t you just a bundle of information! Just to let you know, unless you are a gold/supergold member, the diaryland tech support will NEVER answer you. Back when I had a free account, I put in a support question and am still waiting for a reply over a year later. So don’t worry. Anyway, back to content.
I really enjoy reading about you and your life. It is so interesting, a far cry from some diaries around here. The only thing that I couldn’t find as much as I would have liked is entries where you just talk about what's on your mind, rather than what you had done that day. Just a thought, but try and pick a topic that you feel passionate about, like war, illness, family etc and write your feelings. Try it.
(38/40)
Links: All work as far as I can see (5/5)
Extras: You could work on these a lot more, and they would need to be either under 1 heading or on their own page, as would be a benefit to the links. Otherwise there is way too much going on on one page. (3/5)
Stalkability: Notes, E-mail and Guestbook. Fine (5/5)
Lasting Impression: I love it! (5/5)
Will I come back? Yes (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Its newly married friend.
Total- 94/100- 94%
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