mestupgurl16
11:11 a.m. - 2004-08-12
Username and title: mestupgurl16- |When you go I will forget everything about you|-I couldn’t find any kind of username explanation, and I don‘t like it for the simple reason that it is messed up girl written in slang and I don’t like slang. I’m guessing the 16 is your age. The title is OK. In fact it’s alright. I like it. (5/10)
First Impression: This diary is taking ages to load! Also you have to download the font? (5/30)
Template: When reading/reviewing a diary, the last thing I want to do is download the font. Fortunately it reads just as well without. I don‘t really understand the template theme, and from what I gather, it is scaring me. I think it‘s the blood and the plane. The 2 quotes are pointless and the left navigation is VERY long as it contains pretty much all your extras. I advise you to put all your extras onto their own page and link that. Do the same with your contact too, as your tagboard is lost at the bottom. The only thing I like about this template is the colours used, as I like templates which are black and only use 2 or 3 colours. Otherwise it is too crowded. I think you need a new template all together. (10/30)
Content: You basically daylog, which I usually don’t mind when it’s about 50/50. This is about 90/10. You occasionally have an interesting comment, but apart from that it is all daylog. Some of your daylog is fairly interesting but a lot of it isn’t, because I don’t know you so therefore I need things explained to me. I don’t know where the places are that you are going to or who any of these people are that you are talking about. You need a clear cast page that I can refer to and you can link to when telling a story. It would make it a lot easier.
Your spelling is OK but your punctuation and grammar is not. You don‘t capitalize most of the words that you are supposed to, and you ... a lot too. It makes it much easier to read if you do.
I like the scrolling name at the end of the entries, it’s funky. (20/60)
Links: You have linked me, and as far as I can see all your links work. Just organise them. (9/10)
Stalkability: A nice variety. You have the Guestbook link twice though. Get rid of one, there’s no point in having two. (9/10)
Lasting Impression: I like you, please don’t think that this review reflects my opinion of you as a person, but the fact that your page takes so long to load made me reluctant to read more entries. (5/10)
Extras: A lot, although they aren‘t really clear as to what they are. (4/5)
Will I come back? If you changed your template. (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded): I’m undecided. I think I will have to look some more in a while from now.
Total- 72/150
In 30 days you will be eligible for a re-review if you want one.
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