Minteyes
10:01 a.m. - 2004-07-22
Username and title: Minteyes- Electric Blue Soda Pop Eyes- I cannot find any meaning to your username, but it’s quite cool anyway. Your title I am not so keen on because it tells me nothing about your diary, only the word ’eyes’ appear in both. Very random, unless you have blue eyes and minty eyes.... (5/10)
First Impression: The template is scaring me; I can hardly read the text! (3/10)
Template: The image is freaky, and kind of relates to some of your recent entries, but all in all it doesn’t send me weak at the knees. The entry text is a bit too small, and the links at the side look messy. You should have an extras page for all your extras, and it’s a good idea to have the layout and host buttons at the end of your links. It looks better that way. (10/30)
Content: Many a daylog, but unlike many I happen to like a daylog now and then. There is a striking contrast between your latest entries and your early entries. The latest one is a little strange, because you say that your friends don‘t want to invite you out. Forget them! It’s not that big a deal, its sounds like paranoia.
Sometimes I found an entry that I liked because it was more your thoughts than happenings of the day, and I always like an entry that gets into the writer’s mindset. Your first entry is kind of like that. As far as I can see your spelling is OK, but your grammar needs some help. Not a major thing, but it just makes your diary easy reading that way. (20/60)
Links: You have linked me on the main page. Invest in a review page perhaps. (8/10)
Stalkability: Notes and Guestbook. I always like the inclusion of a tagboard, as they are so quick to use. Also maybe an E-mail or AIM page with those contacts. (4/10)
Lasting Impression: I may pop in again. Your writing wasn’t bad; it just didn't grab me. Maybe it’s the ’Dear Diary’. It’s very childish. (3/10)
Extras: Lots. They just need to be organised onto their own page. (4/5)
Will I come back? Maybe. Still out on that one. (2/5)
Total- 59/150
ALSO TOOK LINK DOWN AFTER REVIEW. NOT VERY NICE IS IT? I diddn't have to review your ass. Diddn't even say thankyou!!
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