Oly-girl
11:45 a.m. - 2004-05-29
Username and title: Oly-girl- B e a u t y - Your username is very random, but despite this, I quite like it! The title is cool because it goes with your template; and I like the spaces in between every letter. I think you need to explain the meaning of your username though. (8/10)
First Impression: Ill assume your beginning entries are testers, because they are very random and annoying. In fact, all of your first entries are very annoying. (3/10)
Template: I like the fact that it has a white background, and the orange has a nice contrast. The pictures cool as well. However, I don't like the 2 random links you have at the bottom, you should have all your links together. I also suggest an extras page to put all your reviews and other extras. (15/30)
Content: Your first few entries are very annoying, mainly because you have bad spelling and punctuation, and because you type in slang. Comparing this to your later entries shows a turn-around. You now right with some degree of intelligence and sign Sara instead of Oly-girl. Some of your entries are a little pointless, with only a word or a few lines. Don't update just because you think you should have an entry everyday, update when you have something meaningful to say. I like the watermelon Ice cream recipe, nice idea! I may have to try that sometime. You hardly update some months, maybe only 3 times a month in some cases.
Majority of your entries don’t really show me your soul, your feelings. There emotionless, except for the occasionally comment. You need to open up more, express yourself. You have had this diary for a while now, so try it out. (20/60)
Links: You have linked me, and as far as I can see all your links work. Just organise them. (9/10)
Stalkability: Email, notes, guestbook, guestmap. Fine. (10/10)
Lasting Impression: You need to work on your diary. Your entries should show your feelings, your emotion, and I couldn‘t find any. Ill be checking up again soon. (5/10)
Extras: A few, although I don't see the point in the moon one. You should try and get some interactive extras, have a look about. (3/5)
Will I come back? Just to check up on you! (2/5)
Total- 75/150
Thanks for waiting so long!
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