Onlydespair
6:37 p.m. - 2004-12-01
Username and title: %%diary-onlydespair%%- [love is not like anything - except a fucking knife]- I don‘t really understand them. But they are OK sounding. (8/10)
First Impression: The side bios aren‘t using capital letters. (0/5)
Template: I have seen this before, and I like the theme of red being carried off throughout. From the text to the image. Very classy so to speak. The only down side, the text is quite small. But I am not sure if bigger text would really suit it so much, so no marks lost. (20/20)
Content: I felt that your latest entry was very abrupt. Did you draw that picture in one entry? It is very good if so. I love when people put bits like that in. Kind of like an E-Scrapbook. Some entries I have problems with, mainly the subject matter, but unlike most reviewers, that isn’t really the point. What I do suggest is that you start thinking outside the box with your entries, think about other topics, ideas, even themes. I tried it, and I could come out with some really juicy entries.
(30/40)
Links: All work. (5/5)
Extras: Lots, but need to be either under 1 heading or on their own page. (3/5)
Stalkability: Notes, E-mail and AOL/Myspace. Get a Guestbook so non-diarylanders could comment. (4/5)
Lasting Impression: I would like to see your diary in a few months to compare. Just to see if time can make a difference too. (4/5)
Will I come back? Perhaps (4/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) In some ways, maybe like a sister Dudette.
Total- 78/100- 78%
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