proudmary04
1:31 p.m. - 2004-08-06
Username and title: Proudmary04- I’ll become what you became to me...-Proudmary is interesting, as I am guessing your name is Mary. The 04 is pointless. The title is nice but a little cryptic. I like it though. (7/10)
First Impression: 2 very enthusiastic thumbs up for your archiving. (30/30)
Template: I love your template. The colours are beautiful, and the image is simple and the perfect size as to not overtake your diary. Mucho credit to %%diary-pink-design%%, I have her templates on my personal diaries. It’s lovely and clear. The navigation is clear, although I usually prefer it to be at the side otherwise is out of sight. Everything such as contact and extras have their own pages. Not too shabby! (30/30)
Content: Did you know that in some of your archived months, if you put all the titles together, it makes a sort of poem? You don’t capitalise your I’s. In fact, you hardly capitalise anything, which is a BIG pet peeve on my part. It looks much better if you do so; it makes it easier reading. Some of your entries have lists in them. There is a HTML code that you can use to make bullet points, which would look cooler.
Your writing on the whole is fine. You mix daylog and thoughtful entries together. I think it is almost impossible to not daylog. I like daylogging as long as it’s not every entry. You involve the reader with your thoughts and it works for the better. Keep it up. So the only thing is the capitalizing that you need to work on. (50/60)
Stalkability: Mail, notes and Guestbook. I always like a tagboard too, as they are very quick and easy. Complicated guestbooks put people of leaving a note. (8/10)
Lasting Impression: I like your diary a lot. It’s just the grammar that is making me tear my hair out. (7/10)
Extras: Many. A couple I don‘t really understand, like Mary is...(4/5)
Will I come back? I would say so (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded): Yes you do. Good stuff.
Total- 141/150
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