punk-loser
10:52 a.m. - 2004-03-10
Username and title: punkloser- Everything you do will be destroyed. I have to say I‘m not really liking either of these. I don’t know if they would attract me to your diary. Title is alright I guess, but you should aim to have one that relates to you. (2/10)
First Impression: An imageless template? I like it! Not liking the last 5 entries at the end. (4/10)
Template: The last 5 entries at the end are in a font that is impossible to read. It is way too small. You definitely need to sort that out. There's no link to the template design so Ill assume that it’s your own work. I love the background pattern/colour, and the white writing is a good contrast so it’s clear enough to read. Its plain, which i like, but as the navigation is at the top, and again, very uneasy to read, it makes it hard to get round the site. (20/30)
Content: I can see that you are rattled by a random diary, which you have linked, due to their style of writing. I couldn‘t agree more, I hate intentional misspellings and bad typing skills, but if she/he wants to write like that, their problem, they just wont get anyone reading it. You writing tends to be very critical, not only of others but also of yourself. I think you can be too hard on yourself, and need to relax. I know I'm not one to talk, my own personal diary is full of such shite its almost farcical, but then again, my diary isn‘t what I would say public. You have gone into great detail about your car, which to me is boring, but only, because I have absolutely no interest in cars. I'm not sure I really like your writing, only because you are very abrupt and short at times. But then again, i think that men in general are. Spelling and punctuation not the best in the world, but legible. (30/60)
Links: You have linked me, links more or less work, although I think the email address you supply is incorrect. (8/10)
Stalkability: You have notes, email and guestbook. Good enough. (10/10)
Lasting Impression: You’re writing is original and you don‘t hold back. Keep that up. (10/10)
Extras: Rings. Your really could do with a cast page, or an about page. (1/5)
Will I come back? Maybe. (2/5)
Total- 85/150
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