Punk-rebel26
4:41 p.m. - 2005-01-16
Username and title: %%diary-punk-rebel26%%- MY INSANE RAMBLINGS I don’t like either, I am sad to say. Not even an explanation into the meaning. Lose the capitals too, it doesn’t work. (0/10)
First Impression: Depressing. (0/5)
Template: I have seen this template somewhere before, but that time it was very askew and badly coded. This one seems not to have that problem. It has a clear layout, but the image is hideous. It doesn’t work with long entries; if you know you incline to write long entries, you need a template, which can deal with this. The font could be a lot more adventurous too. (5/20)
Content: Before I go any further, you really need to archive. Look into that.
You need to sort your grammar out, especially if you are planning to get a lot of reviews. This is a pet hate of many a reviewer.
Your entries are actually quite interesting. Some of them annoy me, and that usually happens in a review, but honestly, I think you are an OK writer. You are very funny sometimes. If you sorted your diary out, you could be scoring very high in other reviews.
(35/40)
Links: Notes do not work. (0/5)
Extras: None. Some brief loves and hates on the main page, but nowhere near close to good enough. (1/5)
Stalkability: Notes don't work on the main page link, but there is an E-mail. You need a Guestbook whenever your Chatbox is down. It was down a few times whilst I was reviewing. Maybe get a Tagboard instead. I like that they are under their own heading. Notes are vital. (1/5)
Lasting Impression: You would pass on entries, and fail miserably in everything else. (5/5)
Will I come back? If you sorted you’re external out. (3/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Not yet. Entry-wise yes. Also, the dudette factor involves a love of all Disney films.
Total- 50/100- 50%
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