Randomness--
5:27 p.m. - 2004-10-02
Username and title: %%diary-randomness--%%- soMeOnE qUiTe RaNdOm- I love randomness in general! You get full marks here! (10/10)
First Impression: My work uniform is Orange...But everyone loves cats. (5/10)
Template: Lets see. I am not oranges biggest fan, nor am I a cat’s biggest fan. But I am keen knitter. (That’s the link of wool). The image is cool and thankfully doesn’t clash with the colour. The navigation is nice and clear but the link colour needs to be darker. The text as a whole could do with being a whole lot bigger too. The font is nice though. Your last 5 get a little lost down their so maybe move them up. (25/30) Content: You are, in a nutshell, a day-logger. I detect the ever so faint whiff of feeling sometimes, but not as much as I was hoping. I was very disappointed with the content indeed, although sometimes you did get a few laughs out of me. There really is no point to your entries, but not even in the random sense. You need to seriously think before you write. Try and have some kind of purpose for the entry, a theme of some kind. You talk a lot about people I don’t know, and the cast wasn’t so much of a help. It was better than nothing I suppose.
On the up side, your grammar and spelling is OK. (15/60) Links: As far as I can see you have no broken links. (10/10) Extras: Quite a variety. I like that they are all archived together too. (5/5) Stalkability: Notes, Guestbook, and E-mail. Good (10/10) Lasting Impression: As a person, you seem really cool. The type of person I would be friends with. The trouble is that as a writer you don’t use the potential that I can see you have. That is what frustrates me. Just have a go writing in a different style. If you rally can’t get to grips with it, then I will change your score. But I think you will be pleasantly surprised. (5/10)
Will I come back? Yes, to see if you have done anything. (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Only the random part of it. That’s all. Total- 90/150
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