Senorita-k
8:14 p.m. - 2004-10-15
Username and title: %%diary-senorita-k%%- need. want. DIFFERENT - I like that you have explained your username. I am not so keen on your title. (5/10)
First Impression: This template is just difficult (0/10)
Template: This isn‘t designed very well. A template should not need a bottom scroll at all. The image is much too big, and the navigation is too disguised on the right. The font is far too small as well. I think you need a whole new template to be honest. (20/30) Content: Vowelled? I think you mean vowed. You also need to archive.
Your writing in some places is interesting, but the rest of the time is just daylog about people I don’t know. This doesn’t make good reading at all. You need to think about your style and what kind of diary you want. Otherwise I am just left with in house stories and jokes that mean nothing.
You need to proofread, as your spelling is awful, as is your grammar and punctuation.
(20/60) Links: My link is broken. Amend this now, it is very important and vital. (0/10) Extras: Put all your extras under their own heading or on a different page. (3/5) Stalkability: E-mail, notes, Guestbook and tagboard. I think that Tagboard’s need to be on their own page. (8/10) Lasting Impression: Yeah, I think overall you need a bit of a re-vamp if you want to get more readers. (2/10) Will I come back? I doubt it. (0/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded)
No Total- 58/150 - 39%
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