shattdsoul
1:48 p.m. - 2004-10-31
Username and title: %%diary-shattdsoul%%- you wrapped your hands tightly around my heart and squeezed it full of pain. - I don’t really like how shattered is abbreviated, and your title is way too long. (2/10)
First Impression: Small colour scheme (10/10)
Template: A small colour scheme can suit some diaries because it gives it that dark dn devious look. The title on the top takes up way too much room. The image is OK, but needs some explaining. The text is also too small and I am straining to read it. I like the like separation of the links and the general layout, except for the Imood and the counter. They need to be moved somewhere less bulky. The “then and now” links would look better capitalized. (10/30) Content: I really like your facts page. Very informative and interesting. I felt like I learnt a little bit more about you. Your writing is interesting, even if I didn’t understand everything that I was reading, did make some sense. Some stuff connected with something. Other stuff didn’t. But no writer can do that with everything to everyone.
(60/60) Links: All working. (10/10) Extras: Fine. Maybe all on one page would be better (4/5) Stalkability: Put all your contact on one page. (8/10) Lasting Impression: 2 thumbs up from me. (10/10) Will I come back? Yeah, sure. (5/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes Total- 129/150 - 86% You are eligible to join the 100+ Diaryring
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