Sickriotgirl
11:13 a.m. - 2004-10-05
Username and title: %%diary-sickriotgirl%%- Hearts Are Made To Be Broken By Love- I don‘t really like your username, as it doesn‘t mean anything to me. If there is a reason why you chose it, make an entry out of it. The title is OK, but a bit random. (5/10)
First Impression: Looks pretty good (10/10)
Template: Another nice imageless template. Credit to %%diary-pink-design%% again. The 2 different pinks look good on black. Very chic and elegant. You’re ’About me’ section is a bit too brief. Your bit where your exras links are is different on your archive page to your main page. (20/30) Content: Before I start, please archive. It is making my eyes go funny looking at all the entries.
I really like the way you put thoughts into a Blockquote. It makes really easy thinking and helps to know how you are feeling. It also breaks up the longer entries. Your content as a whole is really interesting. I started from the beginning and straight away I liked what I read. I also felt really sorry for you on the whole situation with your Dad. It really touched me. I read on and your writing is all the same standard. I like it a lot. (60/60) Links: My link is broken.(0/10) Extras: Reviews, facts and pictures. I think facts should be under the ’about me’ section as it isn’t really anything to do with your diary. You need to work on your extras. Introduce a cast page, or something else. Look at other diaries for inspiration. (3/5) Stalkability: Guestbook, Notes, E-Mail. And all under there own heading. Nice. (10/10) Lasting Impression: I would recommend you to anyone. Maybe its because we are of similar ages. (10/10)
Will I come back? Yes (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Yes. You area a Dudette. Total- 123/150 Please join the dudettestar Diaryring.
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