smalleyes
6:43 p.m. - 2004-03-08
Username and title: smalleyes- Don‘t misunderstand what you see in me. Your username reminds me of a girl I used to be close friends with. She also had small eyes. Do you aswell? I can see in your extras the origin of it. Your title is directive, which always works. (9/10)
First Impression: The font size of your entry is really hard to read. I haven’t seen a red template in a long time. (4/10)
Template: Yes, as I just said, I'm liking the red template because there aren‘t many. Unless of course, you count that nasty red Diaryland template they offer you ready made. The white text is a good contrast also; it’s just the size that bothers me. Image is original, almost familiar, like everyone can relate to it. Pretty good navigation, no problems there. (25/30)
Content: I really love your writing. It’s the style that I aspire for myself. You use beautiful language and are very descriptive. You analyse basic things such as solitude, but you really made me think too. You evoke thought from the reader, which is difficult to achieve in a diary. Your entry on the 1st of February is very nice; you should link to it as it makes a good read. A lot of your entries are lost in your diary, and unless you really pick through them, you miss out on a lot of nice entries. I like that you tell me the origin of your username, very nice. I liked your 100 things pages, they always tell you a lot about the person. There’s not much else to say about your content, because I like it so much. Spelling, punctuation and Grammar are fine. (60/60)
Links: You have linked me, and all your links work. Extra points for the neat organisation. (12/10)
Stalkability: You have notes, email, guestbook and AIM. . You could get more if you wanted them, although checking all of them can be just annoying. Maybe adding something a little more interactive could work too. (9/10)
Lasting Impression: So if your asking me whether I think your diary is good, I would say that it’s excellent. If you were asking me if it’s worth reading, I would also say yes. Get out there now on Diaryland and publicise it a bit in the directories. This is a must read. (10/10)
Extras: 100 things that annoy you and make you smile, reviews, about me, survey, lyrics, updating info and origins of your username, cast. I may have left one out, but you get the picture. (5/5)
Will I come back? 100%. (5/5)
Total- 139/150
Need I say any more to praise you?
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