Tailbonelust
11:06 a.m. - 2004-07-29
Username and title: Tailbonelust- Title is entry name- The username is so very well explained with the story and everything. Full marks for that side of the section. The title is OK, but I am not really fond of those title is the entry style things. It isn’t really original. (7/10)
First Impression: Everything is explained! It makes much more enjoyable reading that way! (30/30)
Template: Ooooh, personalized template. I like. What I don’t like is that it doesn’t all fit on my screen. It took me a little while to actually find where all your navigation is. The image is a little random, but like your username, you have explained it. I like the colours used; white writing on a black background always looks funky. The font could be a little more original and funky, but hey, it is readable. I think the last and next buttons being where they are is not a good idea, they need to be moved to the bottom. The comments are in a good place too. All in all I like your template, it fits into your themes and personality. (20/30)
Content: Your diary does interest me, and I am involved from the first entry I read. You are insightful and funny, with the ever so faint dab of wit. I like it. Some entries are random, but a good random. I chose a selection of entries and enjoyed all of them. Your grammar, spelling and punctuation appear to be fine. You involve specific readers, like the comment competition that you did, which is cool, because there is nothing better than an ‘interactive‘ diary. All in all, very cool. I couldn‘t find any flaws. (60/60)
Stalkability: Loads. Also on their own page which I am always happy to see. (10/10)
Lasting Impression: You are one funky writer and I am glad to have read your diary. I will be recommending you about. (10/10)
Extras: Many. A nice load of entries recommended by you. What I couldn‘t find were any external links. (3/5)
Will I come back? Sure (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded): Yes. I believe so anyway.
Total- 145/150
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