Tokcocktok
6:44 p.m. - 2004-10-02
Username and title: %%diary-tokcocktok%%- 99 Blue Balloons.- I never did get your username. Or your Title. It reminds me of that 80’s song ’99 red balloons’. Any relation? (8/10)
First Impression: You art king of originality. (10/10)
Template: Firstly, let it be known that I hate brown. My school uniform was brown, and I hated every minute of it. I do like the fact that it is self-designed and has that almost ‘rough‘ look, with the tape and the tea stain. It gives realism to the collection of ramblings. It is all in the same colour scheme which is a plus, no random colours splashed in. I do have to strain my eyes to read the navigation links though! I also feel that you could be a little more original with your choice of fonts. (25/30) Content: You are on my personal favourites, so you know that I like your writing, but I do feel that you hold back a lot when you write. I am aware you have a locked diary, but that doesn’t mean this one has to be a numb link. I am happy that you are being more original in your entry titles, as the numbers weren't the best use of that space. I like the strikeout sentences, as I know what you are really thinking. I get a giggle too! I see that you donate layouts willy nilly! Only joking, that was very generous of you.
Your spelling and Grammar are fine, as is your structure. OK? (55/60) Links: I like the exits, even if I have no idea who they are. (10/10) Extras: Some seriously random ones. But full marks for originality! (5/5) Stalkability: All the essentials. (10/10) Lasting Impression: You know I like your diary, and this review I hope will strengthen that view. (10/10)
Will I come back? Well dur! (5/5)
Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) Oui Monsieur Total- 138/150
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