Toweroflove
5:47 p.m. - 2004-11-07
Username and title: %%diary-toweroflove%%- Take Me Away - I like both. Tower of love sounds very spiritual, as does the title. (10/10) First Impression: Another Christian Diary (I’ll explain what I mean by this later) (0/10)
Template: Love it. Fits the page completely, nice layout and colours. It is very clear and bold too. Perfect. (30/30) Content: No offence, but I find nothing more boring than people talking about God and religion. It just reminds me of when I was at school, and how I felt as if the whole school was trying to convert me.
“I would give anything not to have so much pain in my life.” I would have thought someone as Christian as you would never make this kind of statement! As far as I can see from reading a range of entries, you have not experienced even the slightest bit of pain compared to some people.
You need to seriously think about your content. Thankfully, your latest entries have veered away from the classic “Jesus freak” diary, in which I can say is the only reason I am giving you any marks here. The main thing is that you aren‘t considering that not everyone who reads your diary is a devout Christian, and that is why I can‘t relate too much to what you are saying. (5/60) Links: All Ok as far as I can see. Check your completed Puta review link. I think it may just be my computer though. (10/10) Extras: Lots. (5/5) Stalkability: Don’t link your notes and Guestbook on the main navigation is you have a whole other contact page. It is pointless. (0/10) Lasting Impression: I may be being too hard on you, but hey, that is the point of reviewing. (5/10) <-- Because I feel generous Will I come back? If there is a massive turn-around, then maybe (1/5) Do you have the Dudette factor? (Ungraded) No Total- 66/150 - 44%
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